Monday 14 November 2011

Obesity (Outline)

Introduction
Thesis Statement: Obesity now is very common not only among adult, it also among our country children today. Obesity will happen because by people unhealthy lifestyle today.

Body paragraph 1,
Cause: People have their meal not at the right time. this is because most of them busy on work. While they are taking meal, they will take in a large amount of food in one meal.

Effect(a):Indigestion will happen. So, the foods that individual eat will pile in their stomach and cause constipation happen.

Effect(b):Stomach disorder also will happen. Because always endure hunger, their stomach will injured easily and will happen gastropods.

Body paragraph 2,
Cause: Lack of sporting. Most of people even adult or children are busy for their task. So, they will lack of time to sport. they willingly used their time to earn money or play computer games.

Effect: Overweight. This will happen because they no sporting and cause no swear.

Body paragraph 3,
Cause: teenagers nowadays especially students always like to eat junk food and drink soft drink.

Effect: Sick. High blood pressure and diabetes. The sugar level at soft drink such as COCA COLA have large amount of sugar and calories. The coloring at junk food also can make children cannot digest easily.

Conclusion: Nation must be learn to manage their food well to avoid obesity occur. Obesity is the main problem which can get heart attack and stroke. Seek the doctor to get some information about ways to avoid obesity.

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